So I went back and re-wrote the scene between Jack and the Doctor. It was horribly short, and I felt uncomfortable leaving it so 'empty'.
This little argument was coming eventually, anyway. I just wasn't sure where to put it before. Now, though, I think it fits quite well. It adds a bit of substance to the relationship between them - up until now, Jack has been a bit quiet. He may be traumatised, but he's still Jack.
The rewritten version is now live and available here: Lost Boys Chapter 24
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